Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.

Some
people
think that grandparents should spend their time with
children
and grandchildren
However
, others opinion is that they live independently. In
this
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I would like to discuss
about
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views of both the
people
in addition
to my feeling regarding
this
. Many
people
who are getting old wants to live with
children
and grandchildren,
furthermore
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their child
also
thinks the same. Old
people
throughout their life sacrifice for the sake of
children
.
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the end they want to spend their time with sons, daughters and grandchildren for their inner happiness
Moreover
they find the same.
Old
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couple becomes single when their partner dies,
at
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that situation
children
are the most valuable medicine for them. At their ending some have health problems, that time they need a family, that will bring them to normal Person. There is another type of category who thinks that elderly
people
should live their own.
Such
type of
people
doesn't want relations, but money. They take all money and property
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to their parents and leave them in old age homes
In addition
to
this
they didn't care about them. Some leave their parents if their health is ruined,
for example
, if an old one getting I'll, their
children
have no interest in spending money and
finally
they send them to warehouses.
Finally
,
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grandparents
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grand parents
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grandparents
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want to live with their sons and daughters for happiness. In my
opinion
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they should live with their
children
only, I think, that the only way to respect them and giving respect to their age
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