Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people . What physical and mental problems arise from excessive use of these games . How could this problems be reduced .
The problem of
computer
games
was increasing day by day. It has now become more controversial with many doctors are deeming that computer
games
occur many problems
among children
and young humans. There are many problems
related to computer
games
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why doctors are concerned about electronic games
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