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1. Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays we are exposed to many cultures and ways of living due to the growth of technology and globalization. Some people think that a person´s experience is strictly connected with the place they were born. Other´s believe it has a little impact. On one side, we unconsciously absorb the habits and routines we have around us, so it is predictable that our country of origin might have a major impact. Why is that? According to some traditions which are extremely religious, it could be expected that their beliefs pass from generation to generation.
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, orthodox women, since the day they are married, have to shave their hair and use a wig. Their path as adult wives is established by their religion.
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 their customs are highly connected to their context and place of origin.
Besides
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 pattern, our native land could define the way we communicate with others. When we are little and we start to speak we cannot choose the language, it is decided for us.
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, there is some that judge
otherwise
. Certainly with the advance of technology we are more informed of what´s happening in the world and have the power, until some point, to decide what we want to be influenced by. Following
this
, a person born and raised in Europe, with a Christian education, can elect to be a Buddhist because she identifies herself more with.
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, concerning the language, people are able to learn other languages and choose to educate their children in line with
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 habits. In my opinion, more than the place we are born, the major influence of a person´s perception is the surroundings and the people around her. To summarize, even though one´s country is likely to be the major influence, it is possible to escape it and live conforming to other´s country habits.
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