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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true this statement? How far colours influence people's health and capacity for work?

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It is true that
colour
 is one of the ways that manufacturers deceive people to sell their products. In my opinion,
colour
 has
the
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 key role
about
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in
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 people's
decision
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decisions
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whether
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wether
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whether
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 positive or negative. For a start, making a choice is an instinct which comes from our
anchestor
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ancestors
ancestor
 in order to avoid poisonous fruits and choose riper
one
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, and they usually decide to eat a fruit owing to its
colour
.
For instance
, when an
individuals
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 goes to the supermarket, he
tend
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 to opt
riper
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for riper
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 banana by looking
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at its
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colour
 whether it is near
to
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black or not.
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this
 way, manufacturers produce GMO fruits and food which do not lose
its
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colour
instead
 of natural products and shape and deceive
poeple
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people
 to buy
unorganic
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inorganic
 foods. Apart from the ancient instinct,
colours
also
 have negative and positive impacts on
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the decision
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decision
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decisions
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, because of
neurological
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the neurological
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 system of
body
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. Different from the instincts, these reactions of
neurological
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the neurological
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 system can not be controlled, and even most people have not
notice
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noticed
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 its effects.
For instance
, all big restaurant chains use yellow and red which cause hunger and excitement in
brain
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 to attract customers.
Furthermore
,
this
colour
 has
own
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its own
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 specific drawbacks that may cause the
lose
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 of interest. For
this
 reason, the manufacturers choose the one dominant
colour
 to attract customers and other assistant
colours
 to mitigate its
colours
. In conclusion, I completely agree with
statement
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 that
colours
 have undeniable effects on selecting something, due to
the
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instincts and neurological reasons.
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