Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many
people
think that adolescents ought to need to do free
community
jobs in their leisure
time
because it helps not only teenagers but
also
the
community
as well . I totally agree with
this
notion that because it helps to get invaluable training to the teenagers and free access to primary supply to poor
people
.
This
essay will explain why youngsters are involved in the voluntary task in their free presence, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Firstly
, neighbourhood works help younger
people
to receive the greatest
work
experience
from it . After completing school or tertiary
education
and in their free
time
do some unpaid job because
this
is Avery good platform for getting ample knowledge as well as a good
experience
.
Also
, they learn many worthwhile skills
such
as
community
, interpersonal,
time
management and so on which helps to get the best job in their future .
Furthermore
,
,
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employers demand not only high quality but
also
some skills in an employee's CV .
For example
, fresh graduate doctors start to do practice in a rural area for some
time
in order to achieve knowledge and
experience
about how to deal with patients in real-life situations.
However
, the Government should provide a stipend and small incentives to volunteers as motivation for them to
work
more and efficiently . Another benefit to the
community
itself . Poor
people
can access free primary
services
like
education
and health
services
from professionals.
In other words
,
people
who live below the poverty line , are already struggling to earn money to fulfilling basic necessities like food , cloth and shelter .
Therefore
, they do not invest their remuneration in a child' s
education
and health . If a professional doctor provides free medicines and diagnoses without taking any charge from them , it will more benefits to poor and needy individuals.
Moreover
, these
services
have great benefits for the nation's development.
For instance
, graduate teachers provide free
education
to poor children in primary and secondary schools so that poor children get free access to it . thisthisDespite , some rural
people
hesitate to take free
services
without any particular reason. To conclude , I strongly agree with free
community
work
by teenagers because it gives valuable
work
experience
and knowledge of their field and the
community
can get free
services
from experts
such
as
education
or health
services
and so on . I recommend that the government start to take the initial step towards
this
.
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