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Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is believed by some
people
 that most of the higher authorities focused on the economic
progress
 of a
country
.
However
, others think that other types of
progress
 are equally important for the
developments
.
Therefore
, I reckon that both subjects are equally important for a
country
. It is
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well known
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 fact that some
people
 find, economic
progress
are play
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 a vital role in every
country
 which is very important for
the
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apply
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developments
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development
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.
Moreover
, by doing
such
 things a government can provide better services to their citizens because
people
 want to get more and more services
which
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that
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 can help them in their livelihood.
Although
, by getting
such
 kind of taxes on
export import
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 and on transportation, on other useable things and so on.
Additionally
,
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 can raise their economy. All in all, it is essential for providing good facilities.
On the other hand
, some
people
 considered that other types of
progress
 are very essential for a
country
.
For example
, a good education plays an indispensable role in everyone's life.
Moreover
, without
education
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people
 cannot do anything. So the more
progress
 is needed in the education sector. Apart from that, medical facilities can be improved because health is wealth. Howbeit,
transportation
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the transportation
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 system is
also
 very important which can help us to reach our destinations.
At
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 the end, all the
developments
 are very important. In conclusion, Some governments think economic
progress
 is needed for the
developments
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development
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 of a
country
, while others believed that other types of
progress
 are important. From my viewpoint, both can be considered equally for better progression.
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