Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things .Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

There are two various notions about advertising on behalf of the
people
. Many
people
argue that
this
matter is very ordinary and they don’t care about that and
also
its benefit, others think that it is a good way and definitely impressive to satisfy customers for purchasing. Personally, I have the opinion that both views should be given equal consideration for several reasons. The truth is that advertising is a good method in order to introduce our products to
people
and stimulate them for buying. In fact,
this
method has an affirmative impact on
people
‘s behaviour and businesses may determine the
next
step for clients so as to their shoppings from a special brand. What is more, through
this
way companies can acquire loads of money due to the fact that other countries can make familiar with their products and it’s a good opportunity for owners of
such
businesses to export their commodities and obtain sufficient reputation in the world.
Furthermore
, some
people
are enthusiastic to purchase things which they have seen their advertisements in different places and experience new products.
On the other hand
, many
people
don’t pay attention to
advertisement
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in terms of achievement and consider that as a
common place
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issue for customers.
Firstly
, they may think that publicizing is a fritter of resources and
instead
of
this
method, companies can enhance their machinery and
also
increase the quality and the number of their commodities.
Secondly
, some brands are content
of
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their profits and they would like to continue their ways on a regular basis without any risk and trouble.
Moreover
, they have
good
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market in all areas because customers have confirmed their authenticity for several years and don’t need to publicize. In conclusion, in my view, both thoughts have their own merits and equality should be given consideration between them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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