One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new start-up business. Write a letter to him and say - What is your opinion on his new business idea - What have you decided on this matter - What are the reasons for your decision

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Dear Rossi, I hope you are healthy and safe. Today I am writing

this

letter to inform you that, I am very delighted that you select me as your

business

partner. To embark with, in your letter you said to me that, you want to start a restaurant

business

. Which will be located in Khilgaon. I think it will be a good idea.

In addition

, the place is very crowded

thus

I think your

business

will go well.

Moreover

, nowadays people are very food lovers. I think it will be great.

Furthermore

, right now my father wants me to join his

business

. Over and above, these days I am very busy with my studies, and I have to look after my family as well.

Similarly

, I have a part-time job you know that.

Therefore

, I will not be able to do

this

business

with you.

Last

but not the least, as my father wants me to join his

business

I cannot tell him about your idea.

Moreover

, my financial condition is not ok right now, but I wish you all the very best. I hope you will do better in

this

Sector. I hope you understand my situation and do not mind. Please come to my place when you get free time. No more today. With love, Zannatul

Submitted by Zannatul Irin on Tue Feb 08 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

218 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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