You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manage should clo to improve the foocl in future
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you the
feedback of the participants at the meeting.
Change preposition
of the
Firstly
, I would like to tell you the positive response of the people involved in the meeting.They like the way of receiving the senior members gathered in the conference.Even though the hall is small, they have organised it very well.Not only the
staff Add a missing verb
do the
welcoming
the participants, but Wrong verb form
welcome
also
they are dressed in well mannered.
Although
there are positive responses, negative feedback also
plays a key role. Members who are participated in the meeting, they
showed dissatisfaction regarding the food.Mostly 99% of the staff Correct pronoun usage
apply
are disliked
the food.Change the verb form
have disliked
Besides
this
vegetarian dishes are of less choice.Because of this
many persons
did not have their dinner too.
Replace the word
people
Finally
,I would like you to suggest, please provide different kinds of vegetarian and non-vegetarian dishes and keep a separate section for the children with many verities of desserts and Ice-creams. Make sure about quality
of the items.It will get Add an article
the quality
the
good feedback from the people.
Yours faithfully,
Tejaswi.Correct article usage
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite