Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies or interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today, employers often ask
people
looking for jobs for personal information
such
as their favourite entertainment, the things they like in their free time and whether they are married or single,… Although
some people
believe that this
information
can be useful for employers, others including me would argue that this
information
should not be asked.
One disadvantage of asking for personal information
is when an employer is biased towards some people
because of their religion or hometown .This
lead
to injustice in the Change the verb form
leads
workplace
and can even Correct your spelling
create
creat
a clash in religious beliefs . Correct your spelling
create
this
, in turn, cause discouragement in workplace
and can have effects on Add an article
the workplace
people
’s health . For example
in my country, when I went to do a job interview, the interviewer asked me about my religion. Although
I did not know the motive behind the question, since I had a minority religion I did not feel well. Another disadvantage is that,
some Remove the comma
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people
do not like to share their personal information
with others and to prefer
keep them secret.
Some Add the particle
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people
think that asking for information
could be useful for employers, as they understand the personality types of their future employees. As a result
, they choose them in the sections that are matched with
their personality. for Change preposition
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instance
enstance
, if we ask Correct your spelling
instance
for
someone’s free time activities and they tell us that he like sports, we can recognize that they are quite active and suitable for a section that needs active personnel Change preposition
about
such
as mechanical jobs However
, competence and being versatile are most important in the workplace
.
In conclusion, In my opinion, asking for personal information
is likely to create problems in workplace
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the workplace
moreover
, some people
do not like
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share
their personal Wrong verb form
sharing
information
. In the workplace
experience and competence come first
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