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Life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress-related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such widespread in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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In our century humans have become more
stressful
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, and it is caused by several things.I believe that it is not as big a problem as we can though.In
this
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 we will find the main source of
this
 global problem and give advice to people on which way to solve it. Actually,life has become much more difficult than
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 past.
This
 has led to increased
stress related
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 illnesses around the globe. Stress has become a problem in today’s world because of increased job load and poor diet. It can be solved by having a balanced
work
-life routine and improving dietary habits.Going into detail,we should have
strong
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 sleeping mode,diet and
work
,that you like.In fact,many people
sleeps
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 less,than they need,cause of
this
 factor they don’t have energy all day,and when human sleeps less,they will be very
stressful
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.Indeed,
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not
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 less important thing,it’s diet,our organism
need
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 healthy food,so we’ll have happy feelings all day.Many scientists proved
this
 fact,because,when we eat fast foods,our stomachs don’t
work
 properly,that’s why we have
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vary
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 pains and always want to sleep.
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,we don’t take
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 protein.What can we say about how
work
 can be unhealthy and stressful? When people
work
 more than they can,they might be tired.They won’t have productive days
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and will be stressed. In
conclusion
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 I want to give you advice, you need to know your limits.
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 you’ll have an efficient and productive lifestyle.
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