Some people believe that in order to prevent illness and disease, government should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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government actions play a crucial role to raise and maintain public health. There is a common belief that regime and municipal authorities should try to decrease the environmental contamination and accommodation issues. I am convinced that effective

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actions in order to reduce the environmental and housing problems can work positively. Indeed, regarding

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environmental

pollution

, one of the main reasons

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the disease proliferation is the poor quality of

air

.

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, the huge number of pollutants emitted by means of transportation daily would lead to

air

pollution

.

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developed countries, are suffering from lung cancer and throat cancer.

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, if government take effective steps to reduce

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air

pollution

and make that its priority, apparently it will hinder illness and disease in society. Another point to consider is

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the provision of affordable and appropriate accommodations.

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means that

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some deprived citizens cannot afford to buy

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home

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with early facilities to live

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Take the underprivileged people who are living on the margin of

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society as an example, they have no access to clean water and apartment with suitable thermal insulation, so they are far more prone to

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chronic diseases like cholera and flu. As a consequence, the regime should make a conscious effort to provide suitable shelters for them to prevent illness. In conclusion, it is clear that

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public health can be affected by

air

pollution

and the lack of affordable

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. Undoubtedly, the concerns will be solved by

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actions.