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Some people believe that printed books are no longer needed in this digital age, since all the records can be stored electronically. Others believe that printed books still play an important role. Dicuss both perspective and give your opinion?

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 are much better while others believe that printed
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perspectives,
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 in my opinion printed
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 better way of reading as compared to ebooks. In
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 are very informative and easily available on the internet. It's very convenient to access them for everyone. They can be arranged electronically and do not require big storage space like printed
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 of virtual
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 Manchester University of the United Kingdom and in the results it was concluded that more than half of the subjects included in the study proffered to read digital
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 of
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, can not be obtained by reading digital
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. As well as they do not cause any
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 a survey was done
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 Manipal University in India where subjects were asked a
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studying
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it was found that most of the pupils
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complained
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,Printed
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 can be easily highlighted and marked and it's
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 to memorise for students while reading
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. In
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 both
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version
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 are important and they have their individual roles in imparting knowledge and information.
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, I believe
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version
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 better way of reading rather than
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 one.

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