You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir/Madam, During the time I was browsing for night classes teacher and I found

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opportunity on the net and

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would like to apply for

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position.

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, I have gained a

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degree from UBC university in the field of Math, Science and English and

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I have got five years of experience as a teacher in one of the best Canadian

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, soon after my

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, the degree I got training on how to teach complex students along with

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teaching technical methods which can help students to understand the topic easily.

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, I started my career as a faculty and explored all the ways in the field of Maths and sciences,

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I would strongly say that I am a master in these two subjects. On the other ,hand I am very flexible and able to adapt to any kind of situation immediately. I hope I am suitable for

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given position and I would be happy to provide

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any other information is required and looking for your update. I have enclosed my phone number and address in my application please feel free to drop a note if there is any update on my request letter. Yours Faithfully, Ricky.

Toni R

May 5, 2022

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