Many animals today are being hunted to the point of extinction. What can be done to tackle this problem?

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a sign of bravery in many parts of the world. Due to

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many

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are at the point of extinction.

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, various measures could be implemented by the government and schools to solve

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issue.

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, the schools should add in the curriculum the importance of the balance of ecology. Due to

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that there would be less chance of survival if there were no

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on the planet.

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, they are part of our planet to maintain ecological balance.

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, if they are aware that many

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are often killed for medical

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, making leather products, and ornamental things, they will support the government at the time of the campaign.

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measure is easy to implement and a positive result will be seen in the future. The major role will be played by the governments in preventing the poachers to kill the

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for medicine as well as commercial

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. The authorities of the nation have to pass the legislation by imposing heavy fines as well as imprisonment so that the poachers will think twice before poaching.

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, in Kenya the parliament has passed the law the fine

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$1000 and 7 years of imprisonment if any poachers

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to kill any animal, resulting

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animals

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saved

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the extinction of endangered species.

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step could be implemented by all the governments so that we would save the population of many endangered species. In conclusion, only when the school will add in their syllabus how

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play an integral role

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our planet and the government passes the strict law by imposing heavy fines and imprisonment, will the issue be solved