Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than earn a lots of money. Others disagree and think that good salary leads to better life. Discuuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,there is no doubt a huge income offers beneficial for the family. While some certain individuals think that

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at the

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is more crucial than running behind

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. Others claim that a handsome salary is very important to live a comfortable lifestyle globally. In my opinion,

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, I believe that in most cases

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depends on the situation of the person whether he has a family to feed or look after only his expenses as a single person. Some people who state that high payable work or profession is necessary in order to have a good life and they might be thinking that because the majority people live in a joint, brought family background and most cases the whole family depends on one person that father, mother or an elderly adult family member of their family.

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has to take care of his unemployed wife and children under the age of 18. Some of them have around three to five children in one family. Not only that but

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needed some

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to look after his parents as well as his brought family

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as his unmarried siblings, uncle and aunt.

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will clearly indicate the importance of a huge payment that always fulfils the different types of individual needs.

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needs to gain a better and more healthy balanced lifestyle for all the members of their family. And

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a big income gives more chances to save

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in the banks or buy properties and keep for their future.

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, children require proper higher education and suitable marriage once they completed the education that wishes for all parents.

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, those who tell that enjoy at their career all the time is more valuable than earning a lot of

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and he would continue his

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with the

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and it leads to getting more

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and much more productivity which has wishon of the company.

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gain success among the colleagues in the office or better competition between the companies and gets the gold medal prices.

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, some doctors and psychologists say as evident in some articles that If someone is not happy with his career that it will automatically

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him emotionally and physically.

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, he has a risk of getting health issues

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as diabetes, fluctuating blood pressure or cardiac disease.

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, it is considered to think about human

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's validity. In conclusion,

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, those who earn a huge amount of salary would fulfil the needs of the employer and his whole family defenders and

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makes a very important role in people's life and considers it into account.