Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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, it will be different at the office. Many associations argue that how officers dress up

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mattering most. While the rest of the groups think that performance is much more vital. Personally, I agree with the

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statement as a good performance will probably be the reason a

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survived. In

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essay, I will explain more these both sides. On the

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hand, suits are needed to give a good impression when attending a formal occasion. As it probably will get more attention from other companies, especially for

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which has to meet many powerful people.

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, an investor may choose a company who comes to a meeting

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a good dress rather than a casual

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shows a professional than another

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. Another reason is,

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institutions obligate uniforms to show the teammate system at their place.

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, it might be helpful for customers to recognize whether you are part of the

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or not. As an illustration, in the restaurant, waiters wearing uniforms will certainly make customers easier to know who can help them

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the service.

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, physical appearance does not define your success. some successful businessmen tend to have a habit

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casual

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rather than smart look

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. It is probably because relaxing

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might help them generate a unique idea.

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, a well-known businessman in Indonesia, namely Yusuf Hamka, prefers to wear a t-shirt rather than a shirt as it is more convenient and cheaper,

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, his great ideas over

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business

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are popular among his partners.

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, some types of

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values

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creativity more than just an immaculate dress. As it will give them freedom, and

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their

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does not require meeting many people. As we can see, an architect is more likely to wear

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outfit as their

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require a brilliant idea more than a nice look officer. To conclude,

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can be impressive for the

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meeting,

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in the end, what

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most is our

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towards our

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.

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,

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performance is the key point when clients search for their

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partner

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