You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Invite him/her to the event Explain why you think he/she would like the event Tell him/her about the other activities you can do
Hello Tom,
How have you been since we
last
met?
I’m writing to invite you to join the important holiday
in my country Vietnam, called the Tet holiday
on 2nd January,
2023.
Asian people usually celebrate the new year based on the Lunar calendar, we have a bunch of things to do on that Remove the comma
apply
holiday
such
as house decorations, exchange
red envelop and cooking traditional Vietnamese food including square rice cake which is your favourite food. Wrong verb form
exchanging
In addition
, during that holiday
, Vietnamese usually wear Ao Dai which I gave you on your 22nd birthday last
year, if I remember exactly, you were so excited wearing our traditional cloth.
Other than these activities, lion dance is one of the crucial activities for celebrating the new year, for local people it is a good way to bring luck to their future. Luckily, the lion dance festival will be back, after two years of cancelling due to the pandemic, they can show the members how to dance properly and perform as a lion. I believe you will have a lot of fun at the festival.
Hope to hear back from you soon.
All the best,
VivianSubmitted by caotuongvy117 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite