A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties #addresses

Dear Tyson, Hope you are doing great. Thank you very much for agreeing to take care of my pet while I am on vacation. I am travelling to europe and too excited to meet my close friend. It would be grateful if you feed my fish everyday morning. I have placed the fish food in a cupboard beside the fish tank.

In addition

to that, could you please open the windows while you are here to let the fresh air come inside the room.

Also

, could you please collect my mails from the letter box and place it in a computer table drawer. I will handover my apartment keys at the leasing office. you can get the keys by providing your name and the mobile number. if you have any emergency, below is my email-id and mobile number you can connect with me anytime. Email: [email protected] Mobile Number: +44-7123456789 Thanks a lot for your support. We will meet for a coffee once I am back. Best regards, Vivek V

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