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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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Internet
 absolutely has changed the method of getting information, it made it faster and easier.
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 in spite of these advantages, it created plenty of issues, that humankind has to face.
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internet
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 their solutions will be discussed.
First
 and foremost the main and the most serious problem is cybercrime, due to the imprudence of cyberspace users, personal information can become public, and it can cause inevitable consequences.
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, clicking on suspicious links or downloading suspicious files gives
cyberthieves
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 the opportunity to hack
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 bank account or start mining cryptocurrency by using
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 computer’s graphic card.
Second
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 very essential issue. due to its connection with mental health, is cyberbullying. The main victims of cyberbullying are kids, because of their immature
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 it is very tough for them to deal with cyberbullying. Bullying
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 the
internet
 can completely break
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 psychologically, or even become the reason for suicide. It is important to tackle these issues and find solutions. Both problems can be solved by involving government in
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. The government needs to come up with new laws nets to cybercrime and cyberbullying,
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, it is crucial to spread information about these points. To deal with cyberbullying, essentially among children, teachers and psychologists at school should educate children on how to behave and protect themselves online. In conclusion, I highlight two main issues
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 the
internet
: cybercrime and cyberbullying. To solve them the government of every country has to raise the importance of these affairs and educate people on how to use cyberspace.
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