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some people beilive that it is best to accept a bad situation, suchas an unsatisfactory job or shoratge of money, Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #beilive #situation #suchas #job #shoratge #money #situations
In
this
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contemporary
contemprory
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contemporary
 era,
human
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the human
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 lifestyle has changed and people might be in
some
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a
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 bad
situation
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situations
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 to earn enough money to spend their daily living. Some people believe they are obliged to accept that
situation
 but
the
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apply
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others think they should try to get rid of the bad condition. I think that the
second
 category’s idea is more acceptable. To commence with, we all know that humankind has
an
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instinct greed to achieve a higher level of lifestyle in every
situation
,
for instance
, an infant
try
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 its best to learn new things,
learn
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and learn
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 how to walk,
therefore
 growing and developing and learning new skills is in an internal instinct of human characteristics,
thus
 people try to be in
best
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situation
 of their
life
 in each moment of their
life
 and a bad
situation
 is not what a
person
 can always tolerate in.
On the other hand
, when a
person
 is in a bad
situation
 in his
life
such
 as an unsatisfactory job he would not be interested in that work and due to
this
fact
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 he will not be
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successful
succesful
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successful
.
In addition
, if a
person
 is in shortage of money and
do
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does
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nothing
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noting
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nothing
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 to solve the problem and just
get
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gets
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 himself
adopted
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adapted
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 to that condition, he may
could
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not continue a routine
life
, because a lot of pressure would be on that
person
 in a world where
money
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 comes
first
 in approximately everything. So changing the
situation
 would be the best decision.By working
more smart
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 than just working hard, a
person
 can make better decisions and put himself in the best
situation
. To sum up, in my idea as every mankind lives for once, the best decision definitely is
being
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to be
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 in the best
situation
 and not fall into the
habbit
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habit
 of expecting every kind of
situation
 just to live. Thinking thoroughly and making the best decision is the key to
achieve
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achieving
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this
.
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