A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties
Hey jack,
It is been a long time
that
I Correct word choice
since
havent
heard from you. I hope you will be fine and your family members are Correct your spelling
haven't
also
doing well. The reason behind writing this
letter to you that
I am really Add a missing verb
is that
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grateful
greatfull
to you as you admitted to Correct your spelling
grateful
take
care of my house and pet during my absence.
As Change the verb form
taking
you
aware about Add a verb
areyou
wereyou
my
hectic job that I work round the clock. SinceChange the pronoun
the
,
I got my Remove the comma
apply
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vacation
vaction
approval I was not only anxiousCorrect your spelling
vacation
for
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about
house
but Add an article
the house
a house
also
more keen
Replace the words
keener
to
my dog Change preposition
on
tommy
. In fact, once I asked you and you agreed Change the capitalization
Tommy
upon
I was chuffed.
I will Change preposition
to
leaving
on Change the verb form
leave
be leaving
this
coming 21 Dec to TorontoAdd the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
I want to inform you some
crucial things.Perhaps my cellphone number will not be working Change preposition
of some
however
,I will available to Correct your spelling
answer
answere
your Correct your spelling
answer
any
query by mail if any rise. My Correct quantifier usage
apply
tommy
is very sensitive in terms of morning walk so request to you please don’t miss his morning work. Apart from that, you can give him food twice in Change the capitalization
Tommy
tummy
day
.
Add an article
a day
Furthermore
, do not forget to open the switch of out side
light even though,no one is at home. In Correct your spelling
outside
morning
, you will find the newspaper hanging on Add an article
the morning
door
as I have instructed to newspaper vendor so, please keep Add an article
the door
inside
. Rest, you know well and you can find the keys Correct pronoun usage
it inside
of
my house from my Change preposition
to
neighbourneighour
.
Looking forward to your reply
MISBAHACorrect your spelling
neighbour neighbour
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite