Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The diagram illustrates power production using geothermal energy. It is clear that the process uses water and high temperature of the underground rocks , and includes below and above surface stations.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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