IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

8.5

band

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important to be shared freely?

Although many people argue that it is beneficial for companies to provide unrestricted access to their data, I agree with the assumption that business-related secrets should not be distributed publicly because this may result in the company’s underperformance due to a loss of advantage.

8.5

band

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. Topic: information/ business/ choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many claim that people are currently being bombarded with a variety of options. I agree with this assumption, and the following essay will demonstrate that accessible information and growing consumption are two key components that bring about the growth of choice overload.

8.5

band

Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage, and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

All over the world, big cities are having a problem with accommodation for their residents.This essay will first discuss its etiologies mainly the migration from rural areas and overpopulation and it will also give some viable solutions to this dilemma which include developing rural sites and adopting population control measures.

8.5

band

Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Opinions are divergent regarding whether increasing taxes on a variety of industries is the most optimal measure to tackle environmental pollution or legal enforcement and legislation and raising public awareness should be the top priorities. From my perspective, I agree with the latter.

8.5

band

Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as foood, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While many claim that giving minors the freedom of thought on all matters makes it possible for them to become highly egocentric, I believe that this is not the case since a child’s decision is often based on various components to form who they are, and it is crucial that all children gain permission to be present in every choice they make so that they can improve their cognitive skills.

8.5

band

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, there has been a demographic trend that shows a larger proportion of young adults than that of older people. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will first demonstrate that this shift comes with a more competitive workforce and that it brings added benefits to social welfare, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, particularly the shortage of craftsmen, is not valid.

8.5

band

Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

the 21st century, technological development in computer systems is ever-increasing. Many sectors such as communication, medicine and transportation highly depend on this technology. Some believe that dependence on such computer technology has led to dangerous situations. I agree with this statement and facts related to my view will be discussed.

8.5

band

Some people think that teachers are no longer needed because students can study via the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the advancement of technology and the increased number of people uploading content to the web, the internet is full of extensive information about almost anything. It is consequently an amazing learning tool. Some may argue that teachers are no longer necessary as learners can teach themselves by utilising resources available online. I completely disagree with this and believe teachers play an irreplaceable role in education by sharing personal experiences and providing emotional backing which are essential for a deeper understanding of learning.

8.5

band

Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a work with a high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that appointment comfort is much more important than income.

8.5

band

some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country

Some argue for mandatory work in a specific study location, while others champion the freedom to work in various countries. Personally, I align with the latter perspective.

8.5

band

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environment pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the pursuit of preventing disease and illness, many have the opinion that the focus of governments should be invested in housing complications and environmental deterioration. This writer sees the benefit of improved living conditions and better strength resistance.

8.5

band

some people say in order to prevent illness and disease governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the contemporary world, environmental pollution and housing issues have contributed to the deterioration of public energy and some people believe that governments should develop initiatives to address these challenges. While I agree with this sentiment to a large extent, I am inclined that compelling outcomes will not be readily evident by simply concentrating on solving environmental contamination and housing challenges.

8.5

band

Q) Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid any change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people are divided over whether being open to changes in existence is better than doing the same things. This essay aims to shed light on both opinions and reveal my personal perspective.

8.5

band

It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

A common belief is that it is preferable to purchase a smaller wardrobe of higher-priced apparel, in lieu of owning a large range of less expensive clothing. I strongly agree with this concept as pricey outfits last longer and give a much better first impression.

8.5

band

It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.

Some claim that it is more beneficial to purchase less. I strongly agree with this assumption because hardly anyone can anticipate what will happen in the future, and an extravagant lifestyle can cause far more difficulties, especially when catastrophes are besetting the world.

8.5

band

Write about the following topic: Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Countless discoveries in scientific fields could have been successful due to a pre-clinical examination of living things. Hence, it is widely considered that animal tests are necessary for people. However, some strongly support animal rights. In my opinion, this step of scientific research should be banned. This essay will evaluate the reasons for my statement and suggest alternatives .

8.5

band

Handwriting today is less formal than it was in the past. What are the causes of this change? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary world, the popularity of handwriting has been on a continuous decline as opposed to its heyday back in the 1900s when there was no alternative. It is my contention that the advancements accomplished in the field of technology have caused people to switch towards sending online emails and using instant message tools to communicate, therefore, completely substituting handwriting as a method of communication which I believe is a multifaceted phenomenon with both positive and negative implications.

8.5

band

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Various controversies have emerged as to whether professionals should work in other states. While many people think that professional workers owe a debt to the country they trained in, I believe that they should be free to work where they choose because they can earn more money.

8.5

band

In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the advantages of video surveillance outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the installation of video cameras in public areas has increased to reduce crime. However, some people believe that these measures restrict our personal rights. This trend has both merits and shortcomings, and I think that the merits outweigh the shortcomings.

8.5

band

The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

The migration from rural areas to cities has gained momentum over the last half of a century. It poses numerous issues for both villages and towns. This essay will shed some light on the main problems of such a phenomenon and provide several plausible solutions to resolve the same.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.