You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your senior director. In your letter ● apologise for what happened •● explain why you missed the deadline •● tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.
Dear Mr.Doms,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the missed a
project deadline, Correct article usage
apply
along with
this
letter I am going to apologize to you and I will explain why I missed this
work. I expect
you can understand my situation.
First of all, I apologize about Verb problem
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give
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have
negative
impact Correct article usage
a negative
for
our company, I promise Change preposition
on
i
will mend Change the capitalization
I
my self
and apply your Correct your spelling
myself
suggest
to be better.
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suggestions
Furthermore
, it is happen
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is happening
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for as
as
few reasons and I can not predict it. Correct your spelling
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Firstly
, the primary reason is here I have a lot of job-desk and all of it need
to finish at the same time Change the verb form
needs
consequently
I could not control it well.
Therefore
, I need your wise action to change our task more balance
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hence
I can work better. Moreover
, to avoid this
situation in the future I am going to lern
about great time management to cope Correct your spelling
learn
the
same condition in Change preposition
with the
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.
thank you for your nice attention and I expect you can take Correct your spelling
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great
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forward to hearing from you soon.
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sincerely,
Dhoindon.Correct the word
Yours
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Language Use
Starting with an apology sets a humble tone, fitting for the situation. Try to be more specific about the apology to make it sincere.
Task Response
When explaining the reasons for missing the deadline, offering more detail could strengthen your argument. Mentioning the workload is good, but specify if possible.
Future Solutions
Your commitment to improve and request for balanced tasks show responsibility. Suggesting specific solutions or asking for resources/training might enhance this section.
Language Accuracy
Consider using spell check and grammar tools to help with spelling and grammar issues; 'missed a project deadline' should be 'missed the project deadline', 'mend my self' should be 'mend myself', and other similar corrections are needed.
Organization
Organize your letter more clearly by dedicating individual paragraphs to each of the task points. A clear introduction, explanation, and conclusion with headings could improve readability.
Formality Level
Use formal language consistently throughout your letter. Avoid informal phrases and use appropriate formal expressions and vocabulary.
Apology
You effectively apologize and recognize the impact of missing the deadline.
Future Planning
Promise of self-improvement and request for better task management show a proactive approach.
Self-Reflection
Acknowledging the need for better time management is a good self-reflection.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.