Instructions
Read the question below and write a letter.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words. You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in the other city. You mistakenly left a file with important documents at their house.
Write a letter to your friend,
describing the file, tell them why it is important.
ask him/her to return it to you by post.

Dear Rahul, Hope you are doing good. I am writing to tell you about the main documents that I left at your home when I
last
visited for attending a job seminar in your adjacent city.
Last
month when I had visited you due to job schedules, I must say it was
such
a good experience and after so long time. I never expected 3 days visit would turn out to be a short trip. When I went to participate in one of business presentation to another city I got few utmost important documents about the company , which I had to take care of but forgot at your residence. The file contains the budget of
project
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the project
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and other company shares information which is really needed for our valuation of industry.
Also
to mention various
business
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businesses
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handled by them which is an important deciding factor to buy that company or not. As I mentioned , I would need that file urgently. And I was wondering if you could help me sending that document by speed post, marking it as confidential . That would make sure that documents are kept safe and reach me on time. I would be grateful for your favour and
also
invite you to visit my home town and will go together to a good backpack trip nearby. Cheers, Girish
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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