You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, • Let your landlord know that you will be leaving • Thank you landlord for his/her help • Tel him/her about your friend

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Hello Ms Taylor, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you in context to the changes in my lease agreement. I am feeling disheartened to inform you that I will be unable to continue the lease from the

month since I received a full-time job in Nashua.

As a result

, I am planning to move out in two weeks and rent a place near the office to reduce my commute time.

However

, one of my friends, Jay Saxena, has shown an interest in your apartment. I have given him all the necessary details required for the leasing.

Hence

, I hope you will visit the house before I leave and complete the formalities to accept Jay as your renter.

Moreover

, I would like to take

this

opportunity to thank you for the support you have given me during my stay.

Thus

, my experience would not have been stress-free If I would not found you as my landlord . I appreciate all the efforts you have put in to accommodate my needs. Let me know the time of your visit. I hope to see you soon. Best Regards, Ria

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