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In some countries, schools are open till late so that children can be looked after when parents at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

#countries #schools #children #parents #work
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this
 concurrent era, it is becoming
trend
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 to
working
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 late. There is
discussion
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a discussion
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 about that in
few
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 nations, schools are not closing till late timings and take care of students
while
 their
parents
 are on job. I will discuss its both benefits and drawbacks in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there
are
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number
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 of pros
of
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 it.
The first
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 and
the
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foremost is that
,
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 guardians can do their
work
 more efficiently.
As nowadays
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, both
parents
 have to
work
 for their livelihood. So that they can provide every amenity to their child. In spite of
this
, they can put more dedication
in
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into
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 their
work
 and earn more without worrying
of
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about
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 their young ones. To exemplify
this
, In India many kinder gardens are situated, in which they take care of
children
 after their school and help them
in
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with
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 their school
work
. Despite
this
, it can
also
 incline wages of
teacher
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teachers
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 or
care takers
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caretakers
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 who look after
children
 because they provide their double time to students and help kids
in
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with
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 their homework, teach them behavioural
etiquettes
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etiquette
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 and
playing
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 with them in distinct games.
On the contrary
, leaving
children
 in school for long hours have some limitations
also
. When young ones do not get enough time with their
parents
.
Firstly
, a communication gap
starting
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started
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 building between them. They do not share their happiness or worries with their
parents
. They do not like to share their love for each other. Which
create
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 differences
in
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between
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 them. In spite of
this
, few individuals feel low or
burden
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 as they are spending their full day
at
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in
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 one place with
same
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the same
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 people. Sometimes it
boring
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is boring
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 to sit in one room for
whole
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the whole
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 day.
To conclude
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this
, late timings of
schools
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school
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 can help
parents
 to focus on their
work
. But it can create
gap
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a gap
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 between them and their
children
due to
 time management and emotional impact on
children
 as well.
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