The line graph illustrates the average number of UK worker traveling by three different transport from 1970 to 2030.
The line graph illustrates the average
number
of UK
commuters
travelling each day by three different Fix the agreement mistake
modes
mode
of transport from 1970 Fix the agreement mistake
modes
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to 2023
2023
.
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to 2023
Overall
, Car
were by far the most used mode of transport for a 60-year period, whilst Bus Fix the agreement mistake
Cars
users
started to decline and Train users
increased rapidly in the UK
.
In the year 1970, the number
of Car commuters
were
about 5 Change the verb form
was
million
and this
figure rapidly increased about
7 Change preposition
to about
million
in the year 2000. From 2000 to 2030 the number
of Car users
in the UK
steadily increased about
9 Change preposition
by about
million
. Furthermore
, the number
of Train commuters
were
2 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
million
in the year 1970, this
figure slowly went up about
3 Change preposition
to about
million
and remained constant for 10-year
period. In 2010 figures for Train Add an article
a 10-year
the 10-year
users
took a massive jump to about 4 million
.
On the other hand
, Bus commuters
in the UK
were about 5 million
, which dramatically declined below 3 million
in 2030.Submitted by PONKAJ DEY on
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