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you have lost a vsluable item. write a letter to insurance manager

Dear Manager, I am writing
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 email to notify you that have lost an expensive item when I was visiting Paris. Please allow me to explain.
Last
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 week, I had an opportunity to visit Paris for a business meeting. Unfortunately, I had lost my diamond ring,
that
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which
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 was made of gold metal with a single cubical diamond stone in the middle of the ring. I stayed in the famous hotel called “The Park” located
in
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on
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 the main street of Paris. I strongly remember that I wore
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 ring before I planned to step out of my room to attend a conference on the 2nd floor. After the presentation was over, I decided to return to my room, and
that’s
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 the moment I noticed that I had lost my ring. I was positive that I had lost it in the meeting hall. I know that my insurance covers the value of lost items, and I can claim for the value of the item. The price is $2000, and I request you to raise a claim request for
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 value. I am available to sign the paperwork whenever is convenient for you. Thank you for your assistance
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 regard. Regards, Jeevitha

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task response
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coherence cohesion
Strengthen the coherence and cohesion by organizing the ideas in a more logical and coherent manner.
lexical resource
Expand the range of vocabulary by using more varied and precise words to enhance the overall lexical resource.
grammatical range
Pay closer attention to grammatical accuracy and range in order to avoid errors and exhibit a wider range of sentence structures.
Contractions

Formal and informal language refers to using different forms of language in different settings.

In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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