The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013

The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013
The diagrams provide information about the changes in the
Nature
Museum
between 2010 and 2013.
Overall
, the
nature
museum
underwent a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which are the disappearance of a garden and the development of some facilities. The weast of the
nature
museum
saw a number of transformations, with the mammal area being expanded and replaced by the ice age and insects gallery to ensure that it can provide various choices to visitors.
Similarly
, the ocean hall in the centre was extended in order to contain more people.
In addition
, the Dinosaurs and lobby areas in the south of the
nature
museum
are kept in place.
Conversely
, there used to be a garden in the east of
this
museum
, but it was redeveloped into an area that was used for displaying mammals, human origins and shops and coffee sectors to help parents observe their children meantime chatting with friends.
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