The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
The line graph illustrates the production of four types of textile (
polyester
, cotton
, cellulosic
and wool
) from 1980 to 2015. Overall
, it is evident that all kinds of materials had increased from time to time, except wool
. Also
, cotton
started as the highest demand come
off second-best in the end given period by Wrong verb form
coming
polyester
.
Looking at the details, in 1980, cotton
and polyester
started with 12 million
tons
and 5 million
tons
, respectively, and constantly inclined and reached 20 million
tons
at the same time in 1995. While
cotton
had
fluctuated over 20 years and rose to about 32 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
tons
, polyester
constantly inclined and reached a peak at almost 70 million
tons
in 2015.
Cellulosic
, which in
third Add a missing verb
was in
positions
by 1980, had more merely 1 Fix the agreement mistake
position
million
tons
than wool
. In 1986 and 2000, both of them had same
amounts Correct article usage
the same
by
approximately 2 Change preposition
of
million
tons
and had different trends in the next 15 years in which cellulosic
almost reached 10 million
tons
and wool
plummeted one tenth
of Add a hyphen
one-tenth
cellulosic
to 1 million
tons
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