The graph shows data on populations in four countries living in the city from 1970 to 204p

The graph shows data on populations in four countries living in the city from 1970 to 204p
The line graph depicts data regarding occupants in four Asian counties residing in cities between 1970 and 2020, with forecasts for the years 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, all countries show an upward trend of inhabitants living in the city, but, the Philippines is the only country that reports some fluctuations in residents. In 1970, Malaysia
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that 30% of its population
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in the city,
this
percentage steadily
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until 1990,
where
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it
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just over 40%. Hereafter, the proportion of citizens rises steeply to around 60% in 2000 and continues along
this
path till its predicted value in 2040 at above 80% which is the highest point on the graph. Indonesia reports the lowest amount of individuals in cities at greater than 10% in 1970.
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amount
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until over 20% in 1970.
Thereafter
, there is a predicted surge in city residents to
near
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60% in 2040. Thailand
also
indicates an expansion in people from just under 20% in 1970 to less than 30% in 1990 where it plateaus at
this
level until 2020 before experiencing another escalation to below 50% in 2040. The Philippines
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30% in 1970 where it
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until 1980 before rising to under 50% in 199p and dropping to approximately 40% in 2010. The quantity of citizens is estimated to rise to more than 50% in 2040.
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