The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates citizens who were playing Basketball,
Tennis
, Badminton and soccer in a certain country from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
, the number of
players
who were participating in Basketball and Badminton remained steady throughout the given period,
while
Tennis
significantly rose and Rugby experienced a downward trend. In 1985 Rugby
players
were the highest among these four games nearly 240
thousand
but it dramatically declined to 50
thousand
players
,exceeding
Tennis
players
in 1995. In the meantime, people who were playing
Tennis
grew
up
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steadily to approximately 75
thousand
people.
Then
it reached the highest amount end of the period. In early 1985 Badminton
players
recorded nearly 51
thousand
however
it slightly came down by thousands of
players
and levelled off until 2005
then
it shared the same number with Rugby was the lowest
at the end
of the period. Basketball popularity
was minimally change
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around 74 and 76 was stabilized between1985 and2015.
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