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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates
consumption
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the consumption
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 rate of fast food eaten the teenagers
of
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in
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Australian
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Australia
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 in terms of varieties and prices between 1975 and 2000. From an
overall
 perspective, Hamburgers kind of fast food was the most preference among the terns. Another interesting
noticable
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noticeable
 change was Fish and Chips
was
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were
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 popular in
initial
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the initial
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 time
then
 it was placed
the
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as the
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 least preferable. In detail, fish a be chips
was
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were
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 the majority
teens
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of teens
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 prefer 1975, at 100
times
 per year
while
 other two dishes
such
 as hamburgers and pizza had only below 15
times
. In 1980,
fish
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the fish
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 and chips addition rate
was
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decreased slightly, which
is
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was
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 82
times
,
thereafter
, there was a slight increase in 1985, which
is
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was
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 95
times
 and from 1985 to 2000, there was a rapid decrease, from 95
times
 to 39
times
.
In contrast
,
hamburgers
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for hamburgers
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 in 1975, American teens preferred the least amount, at 10
times
, after that, it was a significant increase between 1975 and 1995 and reached 100
times
.
Then
, from 1995 to 2000, there was a fluctuation and it was the most popular fast food end of the year among teens.
Similarly
, pizza, from 1975 to 1995, there was
a
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rapid growth and reached from 5
times
 to 82
times
then
 it
was remained
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remained
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 stable until 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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