The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The line graph compares two types of
shops
which the number
of closed and new opened in a country in seven years
Overall
, shops
that closed dropped significantly in that period but this
rate grew at the end
of the term. The number
of closed shops
did not observe very much however
, it declined final stage.
The number
of closed shops
changed its grade several times between 2011 and 2014 from 5500 to 7100 respectively but the line graph shows that its amount had a significant reduction in 2015 by nearly 500. At that time opens did not have as quick plunge. After that time closures grew just above 5k in 2016. The next 3-year closure grade changed between 5k and 5,2 k
The amount of opened shops
decreased sharply to 4k in 2012 then
it increased to 6k from 2012 to 2014. At that time the total of department stores started to drop by 4k and 4,1k respectively. In 2018 it reached its lowest point in 8 years approximately 3k in 2018.
The graph below shows the number
of shops
that closed and the number
of new shops
that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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