The pie chart charts below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
The pie diagram illustrates the retail sectors via online platforms reported in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, throughout the decade, all of the 4 sectors
distribution were almost similar. Travel and clothes sector popularity Change noun form
sectors'
were
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while
film
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the film
music
and book industry were
increased slightly.
Travelling in 2003 once had the largest market share of 36% Unnecessary verb
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while
in 2013, the travelling department generated decreased to 29% which results
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resulted
music
to be
the strongest sector with 33% of Change the verb form
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sales
instead
, similar to the garment industry which the
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sales
declined from 24% to 16%.
While
the two sectors mentioned above sales
went down, it is noticeable that there were changes in the trend. In 2003, entertainment such
as movies/music
and books was at 21% and 19% of sales
. However
, film/music
had a significant growth in 2013 by 12% which makes the sales
33%, similar to books where its sales
was
increased by 3% which is 22% for total Unnecessary verb
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sales
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