The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The chart illustrates the global output of different types of
games
from 2000 to 2006
Overall
,it seems that the most dominant was handled games
through six years,however
,the most unpopular type
of games
was console games
.
First of all, console games
decreased slowly for 6 years. From 2000 to 2003 this
type
of gaming decreased dramatically from 6 billion
dollars
to 4 billion
dollars
. Furthermore
, from 2004 to 2006 it was unpopular and this
gaming held the lowest rating among games
with 4 billion
dollars
to 2 billion
dollars
. The most valuable was handled from the start in 2002 with 11 billion
dollars
increased significantly to 2003 13 billion
dollars
. Nevertheless
, in 2004 and 2005 this
type
had the same quantities 14 billion
respectively and the end had the largest number of money with 17 billion
.
In terms of online and mobile phone games
, they just appeared in 2002 with the same number of 2 billion
dollars
and in 2004 also
had the same number of 5 billion
dollars
. In 2003 and 2005 mobile phones could outrank online games
,both of these cases had outran 2 billion
dollars
. In 2006 online type
could get first place between these gaming with 10 billion
dollars
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