The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health and Education in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also Infant Mortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992.

The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health and Education in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also Infant Mortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992.
The presented graphs reveal the information about citizens’ main reasons to (is it collocated?)
study
, divided into two different categories, and the amount of support that employers give them (
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pakai them) based on age groups.
Overall
, we can see that the older people are, the less they
study
due to
a career reason and the less support they receive. As far as the reasons are concerned, a career reason used by people to
study
witnesses a consistent decrease from 80% to about 19% among all
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ages. Meanwhile, a different pattern is shown for an
interest
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reason, with the
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increasing from 10% to 70%, which is a seven-fold growth. Only at the age of 40-49 do the reasons for
study
have the same number at about 39 %. When it comes to the amount of support received by workers, the number for almost all ages declines from approximately 63% to around 32% except between the ages of 40-49 and above 49, rising from about 39 % to a high of 45 %.
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