The given bar chart shows the difference of the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian cities between 2001 and 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of foreign
students
among university graduates in several cities of
Canada in 2001 and 2006. Change preposition
in
Overall
it can be seen the amount of international students
significantly raised
during the period. Another remarkable point is that New Brunswick was Verb problem
increased
pioneer
in attracting these Add an article
a pioneer
students
in both years.
The percentage of foreign students
in New Brunswick, Novea
Scotia and Quebec was approximately 6% in 2001. Though Correct your spelling
Nova
this
rate increased to 12%,11% and 8% respectively in 2006. British columbia
and Alberta Change the capitalization
Columbia
strated
with 5% in 2001 Correct your spelling
started
following
by a growth to11% and about 7% for the first mentioned city and the latter in 2006.
Wrong verb form
followed
On the other hand
, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador and Ontario only absorbed around 3% international
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of international
students
in 2001 which is the fewest amount in comparison with other cities and despite their growth to about 7% in 2006, are still on the bottom of the list.Submitted by m.tavasoli18 on
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