You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have an acquaintance that lives there. Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the cit
Dear Mark,
Greetings,
I hope
this
letter finds you well, I would like you to know that I received a job offer from TMA company which operates in your city. Although
it will be agreat
opportunity to see you there, I am still not sure if I will accept Correct your spelling
a great
this
offer or not.
To be honest, I am quite hesitated
as I haven't been there before, Replace the word
hesitant
moreover
Glory City is quite far from my hometown, Add a comma
moreover,
hence
if I get the same offer from the branch here, I will certainly agree. Besides
, the cost of living there is a concerning issue.
Lastly
, I will be grateful if you provide me with some details I need about living in this
city such
as rents rate
, transportation, school fees, and other local amenities. I didn't make my decision yet it depends on your advice.
I am looking forward to hearing from you bro.
With Love,
OmarFix the agreement mistake
rent rates
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Task Achievement
Consider providing more detailed explanations and descriptions to improve engagement and clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make use of a wider range of cohesive devices to enhance the flow of the letter.
Writing Tone
Effective use of a personal tone, suitable for a letter to an acquaintance.
Logical Structure
Clear structure with an introductory greeting, explanation of the situation, expression of concerns, and specific questions.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,