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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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The map illustrates the changes
due to
growing
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the growing
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 population of Chorleywood village located near London in
mid
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the mid
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 19th century from
year
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 1868 to 1994.
Overall
, it is obvious that the surface of the landmarks in use had a
gradually
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 growth
as well as
 the increase in the
villege
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village
infrastructions
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infrastructures
such
 as pathways developments during those years. The proportion of the areas, first and foremost, have been increased since 1868.
At
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initial
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 stage, it was a small location on the right hand of the main road between 1868 and 1883. By the time and in the era of the years 1883 and 1922, the changes
ocuppied
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occupied
 a larger land in the south of the existing
villege
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village
.
In addition
, humankind utilized the surrounding part of the
villege
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village
 and added that to
itsland
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its land
 58 years later. By the year 1970,
this
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 developments not only included the vast amount of ground assumption but
also
 some roads and motorways had been built.
Moreover
, between 1970 and 1994, the
villege
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village
 doubled its size and had the eastern area of Chorleywood
park
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 under construction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words villege with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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