The table data shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the United Kingdom in 2005.
The chart depicts the percentage of expenditure spent by adults and
children
on various things like Food
, Electronic equipment
, Music
and Videos
in London in 2015.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent, that teens, girls and boys had an increment in expenditure throughout the period and the young adults and elders had decreased their expenses.
To begin
with, it is clearly apparent, that Men and Women had the highest expenses in the Food
category, 30% and 39% but by that time their expenditures were falling down to different categories like Electronic equipment
, Music
and Videos
. Men with 21%, 5%, 2% and Females with 7%, 2% and 0.5%. Likewise
, Elders also
had downwards in every category, Food
, Electronic equipment
, Music
and Videos
with around 28%, 15%, 4% and 2%.
In addition
, children
and teens had higher budgets for every single item, Besides
that Children
and Boys have similar spending. Children
with 11%, 35%, 41% and 15% and Boys 9%, 28%, 36% and 20%. However
, Girls have claimed second
highest place in expenditure on Correct article usage
the second
Music
and Videos
with 38% and 16% lastly
, the second least
expenses are for Correct word choice
lowest
Food
and Electronic equipment
at around 11% in both categories.Submitted by tushalk329 on
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