The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.
The illustrated table and pie chart below depict the numbers and percentage of
same day
and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for Add a hyphen
same-day
last
year.
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both charts are diversified and have Remove the article
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its
own overwhelming and small sides.
First of all, the biggest amount of stays Correct pronoun usage
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is
a
state of New South Wales with about eight Correct article usage
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millions
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million
whereas
the smallest has
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a
South Australia with only 2.2 million. Correct article usage
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Second
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Second,
the
South Australia is Correct article usage
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the
Western Australia with Correct article usage
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the
2500 Correct article usage
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thousands
.
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thousand
Moreover
, in the pie chart
the majority of the diagrams cover the public overnight and public same day with thirty per cent each, Add a comma
chart,
while
the minority covered by the Private overnight with only fourteen per cent. The biggest difference between two
charts is the Correct article usage
the two
varience
of the highest and lowest indexes. If in Correct your spelling
variance
table
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the table
this
mark is four times, in Add an article
a pie
the pie
pie
chart difference is only by two times.Add a comma
pie,
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