The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010.
The two pie charts illustrate degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.
It is obvious that the percentage of people who graduated from computer science was higher than others.
For example
, in 1990 the number of computer science degrees was thirty percent
, in 2000 it was up to 40%, and then
in the next ten years
it was about Add a comma
years,
one half
. In the other cases, the number of Add a hyphen
one-half
medicine
was 25 Fix the agreement mistake
medicines
percent
, but in 2000 it Change the spelling
per cent
was
increased by five Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
then
in 2010 it was
decreased again by 5 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Also
, fifteen percent
of law degrees Change the spelling
per cent
were
fell down by 5 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
in 2000 and Change the spelling
per cent
then
it increased to the original value. And in the business sector
everything gradually decreased from 30% to 15%.
In Add a comma
sector,
the
conclusion, I can say that computer science is gradually being provided.Correct article usage
apply
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