The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010.

The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010.
The two pie charts illustrate degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010. It is obvious that the percentage of people who graduated from computer science was higher than others.
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, in 1990 the number of computer science degrees was thirty
percent
, in 2000 it was up to 40%, and
then
in the next ten
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it was about
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. In the other cases, the number of
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was 25
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, but in 2000 it
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increased by five
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and
then
in 2010 it
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decreased again by 5
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.
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, fifteen
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of law degrees
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fell down by 5
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in 2000 and
then
it increased to the original value. And in the business
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everything gradually decreased from 30% to 15%. In
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conclusion, I can say that computer science is gradually being provided.
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