The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
The broken line
grapth
illustrates the Correct your spelling
graph
amount
of tourists that a Change the quantifier
number
specfic
Caribbean Correct your spelling
specific
island
had from 2010 to 2017. Overall
, there were
an upward trend Change the verb form
was
Change preposition
in
of
the number of visitors they had, Change preposition
in
Correct word choice
and
which
the figure Correct word choice
and
shown
who chose to stay on both Add the auxiliary verb
is shown
Correct article usage
the cruise
cruise
Correct article usage
the cruise
ship
and Correct article usage
the island
island
Correct article usage
the island
also
had a climb.
The total number of tourists had a significant growth, form
1 Correct your spelling
from
million
in 2010 to 3.5 millions
in 2017. Those who chose to stay on Change to singular
million
island
had doubled from 0.75 Correct article usage
the island
million
in 2010 to 1.5 million
in 2017, while
those stayed
on Correct pronoun usage
who stayed
ship
even Add an article
the ship
jumpped
from 0.25 Correct your spelling
jumped
million
in 2010 to eight times higher in 2017.
Throughout the eight years, the island
used to have more visitors stayed on island
, Add an article
the island
untill
2016, Correct your spelling
until
where
Correct word choice
when
who
stayed on Correct pronoun usage
those who
island
had a sudden drop of 0.25 Add an article
the island
million
. Indead
, there was a jump in number from 0.75 Correct your spelling
Indeed
Instead
million
in 2011 to 1.5 million
in 2013, and remain
stable till a sudden Wrong verb form
remained
declined
in 2016 and Change the form of the verb
decline
resummed
in 2017. From 2016 onwards, more visitors chose to stay on Correct your spelling
resumed
ship
compared with Correct article usage
the ship
that
who stayed on Correct determiner usage
those
island
. Add an article
the island
In
2010 to 2012, the trend of Change preposition
From
visitor
Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
stayed
on cruise Wrong verb form
staying
ship
Fix the agreement mistake
ships
fucturated
, but Correct your spelling
fluctuated
a
rapid growth Correct article usage
apply
was
followed and reached 2 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
in 2017.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, ship, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 8 times.
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