The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the numer of new shops that opened in one coutry between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,
The line chart depicts information about the number of stores that were closed and the number of new stores that were opened in one nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it is evident that both figures experienced decreases with several fluctuations throughout the period given. However
, openings of new shops were decreased more compared to closures.
As the graph shows, the number of closed shops stood at over 6000 in 2011 and made up exactly 6000 in 2012. Then
it increased above 7000 in 2013 before falling to approximately 6500 in 2014. Additionally
, it saw fluctuations from 2014 to 2016, making up just over 5000 in 2016. And then
the figure went down in 2017 and accounted for nearly 5000 in 2018.
On the other hand
, the figure for openings started at almost 8500 in 2011, then
it sharply fell to 4000 in 2012. Then
it climbed up gradually until 2014, with over 6000 before leveling off at 4000 in 2016. Finally
, it saw a slight increase in 2017 before falling to 3000 in 2018.Submitted by mohammad39 on
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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