The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The
line
graph illustrates average carbonic acid emissions per person
in several countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, the highest index
in the graph belongs to the UK. The sharp decrease was in Sweden. In comparison with Sweden, Portugal outlived the quick increase.
To begin
with, the highest rate of carbon dioxide per person
was in the UK. This
reaches 11 metric tonnes
per person
. Nearer to 2007, this
index
decreased by 9 metric tonnes
. The next high figure belongs to Sweden. In 1967, this
score was about 9 metric tonnes
but in 1977, this
index
reached its peak at about 11 metric tonnes
per person
. And in 2007, this
rate sharply decreased by 6 metric tonnes
The Italy score in 1967 was 4 metric tonnes
per person
. After 40 years, this
index
increased to 8 metric tonnes
. The last
line
was Portugal. This
line
was about 1 metric tonnes
in 1967. After 20 years, this
rate grew slowly and reached about 3 metric tonnes
per person
. And in
2007, Correct word choice
In
this
line
grew to 5 metric tonnes
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