The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Both diagrammatic representations illustrate an ait, before and after the developmental process of illustrating a new site for tourism.
However
, authorities had been dedicated to protecting the landscape and the nature of the Isle. Because coconut trees on the island and the seashore survive
according to
their natural aspects in both maps.
Whereas
, facilitators constructed attractively and circularly arranged two accommodation clusters near the beach, which is situated on the North-western side and the centre of the island next to the reception hall.
Also
set up a footpath
communicate
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to communicate
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the accommodations and
runs
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run
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through the beach area. Well-planned swimming
are
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is
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also
shown in the second graph by the beach.
Additionally
, they had developed a pier at the Southern Ocean and a vehicle tract starting at the pier and boosting around the reception building until the restaurant was designed near the Northern coastal area.
As well as
, a boat service in the Southern sea on behalf of the increasing tourist attractions.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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