The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The chart illustrates the Co2 emissions of each person in four countries from 1967 to 2007. The number of Italy and Portugal increased dramatically
although
both of the other countries, the United Kingdom and Sweden finally
decreased between 1967 to 2007.
The amount of everybody used CO2 in Italy stood at 4 in 1967 and experienced a boom in 1997 then
increased normally till 1997 and after that was constant till 2007. There was a slow increase from 1967 to 1987 in Portugal but there was a shoot of almost 5 metric tonnes in 1997 after that this
amount was constant.
The number of Sweden
emissions in metric tonnes was Change noun form
Sweden's
proximately
8 in 1967 Replace the word
approximately
this
number experienced a fluctuation till 1987 deceased slowly till 2007 by less than 6.The United Kingdom by almost 11 metric tonnes incresaed
sharply from 1997 Verb problem
apply
till
2007.Change preposition
to
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